Developmental Editing Evaluates:


  • Plot progression & consistency

  • Genre expectations

  • Character arc development (Motivations, relationships, internal conflict, etc.)

  • Pacing from entire manuscript to scene level

  • How Tension & Conflict drive the story forward

  • World-building integration (if applicable)

  • Immersive experience for readers (sensory details, narrative distance, evoking strong emotion)

  • Analyze how to connect story elements to create a cohesive and compelling manuscript that fits your vision!

Services Include:

  1. Free 1,000-word edit sample of your manuscript

  2. Video chat/phone call discussing expectations, desires, getting to know each other and your story

  3. In-manuscript comments on developmental edits

  4. Midpoint check-in over email

  5. Final Editorial letter detailing strengths and areas to consider

  6. Final video chat/call to recap all edits and brainstorm future action!

How Much Does it Cost?

My rate is 0.012 cents per word. I’m open to discussing flexible payment options.

I accept short stories, novels, and flash fiction, but I specialize in Fantasy and Romance genre fiction and everything in between. Reach out and see if we’re a good fit!

Get in touch to get a free 1,000-word editing sample!