Manuscript Editing Services
Elevating your story to meet your vision
“Lily has a way of working with authors that I have never found with another editor or beta reader; she disarms all your reservations while opening up your mind to other opportunities.” - Sofia, Author
You’ve poured your heart into your story and now you are seeking guidance on the next step. Whether you are stuck in an early draft or seeking final feedback on a project- I am here to meet you where you are.
As a professionally trained developmental editor, I am here to be your collaborative, creative partner. I’ll dive deep into the foundation of your story to make sure your vision shines through.
As an author myself, I handle each story with the same love as my own. I’m excited to work together!
Types of Services
Developmental Edits (Popular!)
In-depth feedback through in-manuscript commentary, video calls, and delivery of 10-20 page editorial letter
Manuscript Evaluation
Overarching developmental feedback of the manuscript through 5-10 page editorial letter
Early Assessment
Provide direction for early drafts (incomplete or complete), with 3-5 page assessment letter
Professional Beta Reader
Overall reader perspective feedback through in-manuscript commentary, including 1-2 page feedback summary
Writing Consultation
1-hour video chat giving personalized guidance to specific writing challenge
Testimonials
“Working with Lily has been one of the highlights of my writing process as she helped to delve into the terrifying abyss of developmental edits for my dark academia fantasy novel, and from the very beginning, her approach was thoughtful, kind, and incredibly insightful. What really stood out to me was how she didn’t try to fix the book for me — instead, she asked the kind of questions that made me think differently about my characters, plot, and themes. Half the time I found myself wondering, “How did she even think to ask that?” in the best possible way. Her in-line comments were a great balance of critique and encouragement — not just pointing out what wasn’t working, but also celebrating the parts that were. On top of that, she wrote a short editorial letter after each chapter, summarising what she thought was happening. It might sound simple, but that helped me realise what was actually making it onto the page… and what wasn’t. That kind of perspective is hard to get on your own. It meant a lot to be her client, and I feel lucky to have had her on my side during this extremely difficult part of the journey.”
“I loved Lily’s approach to editing my manuscript, she took time to meet with me before and after the edits were completed, to get a feel for what I was looking for. I think she did an excellent job and she is definitely worth hiring! If you’re looking for someone who will care for your manuscript as much as you do, you’ve found your editor!
The thing I found most refreshing about Lily’s style of editing is that she works with what you have—instead of pulling it apart— and helps you find the best version of your own story. Essentially walking with you through the dungeons of your imagination, guiding you as you find the missing pieces that were there all along! She’s wonderful to partner with to help you really heighten your work and bring it to the next level!”
“Lily’s approach to feedback is uniquely influenced by her understanding of storytelling and characters. While working with Lily, she took delicate care of my work while providing incredibly constructive and honest feedback - she went above and beyond as a beta reader! She provided detailed feedback through various areas of my work, not just focusing on her raw reaction as a reader, but providing insight through her writer’s eye. From character to plot and prose, Lily laid out extensive thoughts and critiques throughout my entire manuscript. Even in the feedback that was hard to hear (suggestions to change things I loved), she was delicate in the way she explained her intentions. Her tender care for my story allowed me to take in that feedback and see her reasoning more clearly. My story changed for the better with Lily as a beta reader and guide through my editing process. Lily has a way of working with authors that I have never found with another editor or beta reader; she disarms all your reservations while opening up your mind to other opportunities. My story felt safe in her hands, because it was clear she loved it and wanted the best for it as if it were her own. I would vouch for her skills, services and personality a million times over. I anticipate we will be seeing great things from her in the future, and I look forward to working with her again soon.
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